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i once believed in the perfect song
i looked far and wide in search of it
in yours i found many a perfect measure
and for a while i thought yours was the one
it is the one i m still dancing to
but even musical tastes are socially constructed
that is what little i ve learned
dance moves only respected when they are a challenge
but why should we care what the judges think
are we their pawns or are they ours
i wanted to learn how to write the perfect song
i wanted to relive what i felt when i first heard yours
but in the end there was only one guarantee
it had to be replayed from the beginning
until i find a way
i looked far and wide in search of it
in yours i found many a perfect measure
and for a while i thought yours was the one
it is the one i m still dancing to
but even musical tastes are socially constructed
that is what little i ve learned
dance moves only respected when they are a challenge
but why should we care what the judges think
are we their pawns or are they ours
i wanted to learn how to write the perfect song
i wanted to relive what i felt when i first heard yours
but in the end there was only one guarantee
it had to be replayed from the beginning
until i find a way
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the initial conditions will never be the same again
unless the entire game is restarted
and all memory erased
unless the entire game is restarted
and all memory erased
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I really like your poem. It's very heartfelt. Beautiful job on this.